11 Chapter 11–Introduction to Legal Writing

Rule-Based Writing and IRACMuch of the material below is adapted from Drew Loewe, UndergraduateLegal Writing: an Open Resource, licensed under a Creative CommonsAttribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 4.0 International License, found athttps://drew-m-loewe.gitbook.io/undergraduate-legal-writing-an-open-resource.Except for purely legal issues, such as issues about the meaning of a rule,every objective analysis (such as in a predictive memorandum) or persuasiveargument (such as in motion papers filed in court) is rule-based. That is, itcenters on how a given legal rule does, or does not, fit a particular set of facts.IRAC OrganizationIn this course, you will learn that when analyzing or arguing a legal issue, youshould follow an organizational form that goes by the abbreviation IRAC (“eye-rack”). There are other organizational forms for legal writing, but IRAC is mostcommon.IRAC is the organizational form for analyzing or arguing about a single issuegoverned by a single legal rule. This course centers on single-issue legalanalyses or arguments. However, it can also be used in multiple-issuesituations, as long as you follow the format for each separate issue. IRAC isjust a way to organize your writing to apply the law to the facts to solve a legalissue.Here is a chart of the organization of a single legal analysis or argumentthat does rule-based reasoning:IRAC Organization(Refer to this chart often) I – the legal issue in the case (can be stated asa question or a statement)R – the legal element or rule at issueA – application of the key phrases from the rule explanation to the factsof this case, in the same order that they appear in the rule explanationC – final statement of conclusion

At its core, a single legal argument or analysis is about applying a legal rule tothe relevant facts of a particular case. Here is a complete legal analysis in astraightforward case, a small kernel of what IRAC does:Simple Legal Analysis: SpeedingIssue – Is our client, Joe Smith, liable for speeding?Rule – If a driver travels in excess of 30 mph on Delaware Avenue, he is inviolation of Municipal Code §789.2.Application – Joe Smith was driving his car at a rate of 45 mph on DelawareAvenue when he was stopped by a police officer.Conclusion – Thus, Smith was in violation of Municipal Code §789.2 when hedrove on Delaware Avenue.You can use this type of simple rule application when you write certain kindsof legal genres, such as some client letters. Here is a sample client letter witha single legal analysis:Dear Mr. Smith:I write to follow up on our July 8th meeting.On March 11 this year, you were issued a ticket for speeding on DelawareAvenue and were charged with driving at 45 mph in a 30-mph zone. You wantto challenge that charge (ISSUE) because your license already has threespeeding violations, and your insurance company will not renew your policy ifyou get a fourth violation.If we ask for a trial to contest the ticket, you will lose because the speed limiton Delaware Avenue is 30 mph, (RULE) and police radar shows you weretraveling at 45 mph. Police officers are trained to demonstrate that their radarequipment is properly calibrated and accurately used. (APPLICATION) Thus,the prosecutor will be able to show that you were in violation of MunicipalCode §789.2 (CONCLUSION). Please let me know how you wish to proceedbefore our court appearance on August 22.I strongly suggest that we enter plea negotiations with the city prosecutor. Shewill probably agree to reduce the charge to a non-moving violation becausethe city can keep any money that it collects from fining you due to a non-

moving violation. In contrast, the state would get the money collected for aspeeding conviction fine.(Signature)That is a simple example of Issue, Rule, Application, Conclusion.However, most legal issues are based on rules that include terms that aremore complex or open to interpretation than a simple speeding ordinance.When writing a memo or brief, you will often need to add an explanation of thekey terms that define the rule and apply the same key terms to the facts ofyour case. Sometimes, we might call the Rule a Rule Explanation section ifthis is necessary, especially if you need to find a rule by putting togetherseveral cases. It is, therefore, perfectly fine to explain your rules a little whennecessary—you’ll see this in an example below.Tips for Rule Explanations A rule explanation should consist of the rule’s essential terms, which arethe words or phrases at the heart of the issue of how the rule applies. Use your explanation to clearly and concisely identify the key terms thata court would likely consider when analyzing the particular issue thatyou are writing about. Ground your explanation in mandatory authority. Except for the key terms, avoid overreliance on the court’s actuallanguage, which can result in an awkward series of quotes. For conciserule explanations, use ellipses and minimize the use of block quotations.IRAC Example: Rule-Based WritingLet’s see what IRAC looks like in a fleshed-out legal argument. Below is anIRAC rule-based argument. It is an excerpt from a brief filed by a prisoner whois opposing the government’s attempt to defeat his civil rights case without theneed for a trial (this is called a “summary judgment”). Later, you will find thissame annotated IRAC, with reasoning by analogy added. But for now, let’sfocus on its use of a legal rule and explanation of that rule.(Don’t worry if you don’t understand the format of legal citations. You will learnabout that in later sections. For now, just read this example as a good

illustration of IRAC writing. References to R indicate citations to particularpages in the record to support a factual statement.)Example IRAC ArgumentISSUE: Does the evidence genuine issues of material fact as to whether thedefendant guard, Officer Rath, knew that the plaintiff prisoner, Mr. Fox, was ata substantial risk of serious harm from other inmates, particularly Mr. Ball?RULE: Prison officials meet the knowledge prong of a deliberate indifferenceclaim when they are subjectively aware of a substantial risk of serious harm toprisoners. Farmer v. Brennan, 511 U.S. 825, 837 (1994). Although an official“must be aware of facts from which the inference could be drawn that asubstantial risk of serious harm exists, and he must also draw the inference,”a claimant can demonstrate that an official had knowledge if a risk is obvious.Id., at 837, 844. An obvious risk can be shown by evidence that prisonassaults were “longstanding, pervasive, well-documented, or expressly notedby prison officials” because these circumstances suggest an official must haveknown. Id., at 842-43.MORE RULE with EXPLANATION: Whether a prison official is subjectivelyaware of a substantial risk of serious harm “is a question of fact subject todemonstration in the usual ways, including inference from circumstantialevidence.” Id., at 842. Advance notice is not necessary to establishknowledge if a prisoner falls into a victim-prone category. Id., at 843; Corbettv. Kelly, No. 97-CV-0682 E, 2000 WL 1335749, at *4 (W.D.N.Y. Sept. 13,2000). Thus, a prison official may be put on notice that a prisoner faces asubstantial risk of serious harm if there is a similar history of violence at theprison. One circumstance that can give rise to knowledge of an obvious risk isif there are classes of victim-prone prisoners whom officials know are moresusceptible to attack. See Farmer, 511 U.S. at 843.APPLICATION: Examining the evidence in the light most favorable to Foxraises the inference that Rath knew that Fox was at a substantial risk ofserious harm for two reasons. First, Rath knew that as a convicted sexoffender Fox was victim-prone. After all, Rath admitted he knew that the DOJfound sex offenders at the Holding Center were targeted, and he knew thatFox was a convicted sex offender. (R.30).Second, Rath knew about Ball’s well-documented history of violent behaviortowards sex offenders. (R.30). Rath also knew that Ball was a security risk

who was ordered to stay away from other prisoners. (R.32). Ball had a well-documented history of violent offenses on his intake sheet, including anassault on a convicted sex offender at the Holding Center. (R.29). BecauseBall had assaulted another prisoner earlier in the same day he assaulted Fox,he was classified as a security risk and ordered not to comingle with otherprisoners (R.53, 55). Rath heard Ball threaten that prisoner hours before heassaulted Fox. (R.33). And Rath admitted he had read both Ball’s IntakeSheet and the order that classified Ball as a security risk. (R.29, 53, 56).Indeed, Ball’s taunting of Fox as a “pervert” while he beat and kicked Fox(R.34) underscores that a jury could rationally infer that Rath was on noticethat Fox faced a substantial risk of harm.CONCLUSION: These facts all would allow a jury to draw the reasonableinference that Rath knew Fox was at risk of harm. Thus, there are genuinequestions of material fact, making summary judgment inappropriate.The same IRAC form would apply to objective writingThat example was of a legal argument—the prisoner is seeking to persuadethe court that his civil rights case should not be thrown out. The form of thereasoning would be the same in an objective analysis, such as in a predictivememorandum. See the examples of predictive memoranda in this resource. Ifyou were to review those examples, would you be able to spot the I, the R, theA and the C? As with the argument above, where would you put which letterand why?Test your understanding: Scrambled IRAC ActivitiesTest your understanding of IRAC by reordering the numbered passages into acoherent IRAC. Why is the order you put them in the right one to make acoherent IRAC?(Credit for activity: Meredith Aden)1) I have been asked to analyze whether the Phoenix Club will likely be heldliable for Peterson’s injuries caused by Dixon’s operation of a motor vehiclewhile intoxicated.

2) Dixon’s statement establishes that in the hour before he arrived at the club,he had drunk two 16-ounce alcoholic energy drinks and all but one “swig” of a750-ml “fifth” of 80-proof bourbon.3) A liquor licensee “is under a duty, imposed both by common law principlesand statute, to exercise affirmative, reasonable care in serving intoxicants topatrons who might later injure themselves or an innocent third party, whetheron or off the premises.” Patterson v. Thunder Pass, Inc., 214 Ariz. 435, 438(App. 2007).4) In Patterson, a bar served alcohol to an obviously intoxicated patron. 214Ariz. at 436. But when the patron tried to leave, a bar employee took her carkeys, drove her home in another vehicle, returned her key, and returned to thebar. Id. Unbeknownst to bar employees, the patron walked back to the barparking lot, retrieved her car, and caused a collision. Id.5) “Obviously intoxicated” means “inebriated to such an extent that a person’sphysical faculties are substantially impaired and the impairment is shown bysignificantly uncoordinated physical action or significant physical dysfunctionthat would have been obvious to a reasonable person.” A.R.S. § 4-311(D).6) Arizona’s “dram shop” statute, A.R.S. § 4-311(A), provides that a licenseeis liable for property damage or personal injuries if the licensee sold liquor toan obviously intoxicated person and that person’s consumption of the liquorproximately caused the plaintiff’s injury.7) The Patterson court affirmed a summary judgment for the bar because thebar’s employees “fulfilled their legal duty of affirmative, reasonable care to [thepatron] and the public by separating [the patron] from her vehicle andarranging for, as well as subsequently providing, the safe transportation of[the patron] to her residence.” Id. at 439.8) Thus, in light of all the evidence, the Phoenix Club will likely be held liablefor Peterson’s injuries.9) Given the three-hour period that Dixon was at the club, his pre-arrivalconsumption of alcohol, the twelve beers he consumed while at the club, andthe fact that he left the club without interference from employees, a jury wouldlikely find that Dixon was obviously intoxicated at the club, but was servedalcohol anyway and that the club did nothing to keep Dixon from causinginjury to others in his intoxicated state.

10) However, even if a licensee serves alcohol to an obviously intoxicatedpatron, it might still escape liability if it fulfills its duty of affirmative, reasonablecare to the patron and the public by other means.11) Here, the evidence is that The Phoenix Club did not exercise reasonablecare in serving alcohol to Dixon or in its interactions with him after he becameintoxicated.12) Once at the club, he drank twelve 12-ounce bottles of beer—144 ouncesof 5% alcohol—over the next three hours. He said that he became intoxicatedand was “in [his] own little world.”ANSWER in order:ISSUE (1)RULES (3, 6, 5, 10, 4, 7)APPLICATION (11, 2, 12, 9, 8)CONCLUSION (8)Note that in this example there seems to be a lot of rules. Some would arguethat the Patterson discussion is rule explanation or analysis—and either isOK! Because you write the rules first and then the analysis, one will lead intothe other in your brief.

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